![]() ![]() I thought the narrator had a great voice, but maybe he should have read each chapter before narrating. I think this is a great start to a great new series and I already have the second book already in my library and download it. I love the legal jargon and I also love that most of the book doesn’t take place in a court run. Every time I thought I knew what was going to happen something completely different happened. Good luck Daniel Maldonado.got to run.A Fleeing Felon awaits me! For example in this book, much of the couples backgrounds in the first 1/3 could have been done in flashbacks or cast into a character reviewing the past in a conversation. Consider a chronological plot line with clear date markers if you need to move back in time. If a character is not going to play a key scene in the plot minimize them to a nameless description. in other words have a stronger "hook" or a "better lead sentenc." 3. "Columbo" the plot structure.in other words move the crime or central issue to the first one or two chapters. the narrator, while he is good and slips painlessly between ethnic accents uses a pacing and pause pattern that becomes sing-songy and detracts from textual meaning, 2. a slip and fall turned wrongful death, shared liability case. ,lthe authentic portrayal of middle class Hispanic/Latino culture, a story with "real" law, i.e. the personal glimpse into the practical daily work of the law 2. I feel we are watching a great offer learn and perfect his craft as the story unfolds. Rich in diverse characters, the "crime" does not happen until over 1 hour into audiobook. ![]() Here's why: Author, Daniel Maldonado, shares with us his debut novel in the thriller/mystery genre. A few characters carry over, but no "thru" plot line.) I liked the book and will read more from this author. (This is book 2 in a series, but works easily as a stand alone.
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